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When Blight Begins

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mrguy08 Class 100 Hero Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 223 Location: South Mississippi	Posted: Thu Jun 22, 2006 11:42 am    Post subject: When Blight Begins   I know this is just an intro to a larger story but it did come off as kind of short. Short and sweet is a good way to describe this though. I gotta wonder what happens to all the normal prisoners who aren't killed or rounded up in those Arachnos breakouts. Also, the part where he's walking through the water and he first steps into "The Muck" is creepy and cool. And does anyone else notice how a lot of villains use red and black in their outfits? Are those the only villainous colors? I made one with yellow and orange (and red) just to be different. _________________ Example of irony: Hippopotomonstrosesquippedaliophobia= fear of long words.
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fixit God-like Powers Joined: 01 May 2006 Posts: 605 Location: Utah	Posted: Thu Jun 22, 2006 2:32 pm    Post subject:   I have a Green and black.. is that different enough. OH! Emplate is Orange and black, that's different! OK, I gotta go read this now. _________________ Consider it fixed!
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fixit God-like Powers Joined: 01 May 2006 Posts: 605 Location: Utah	Posted: Thu Jun 22, 2006 4:51 pm    Post subject:   YES! Someone has written a story shorter than mine are! I actually remember when I first came to this site, i looked for easy read one-shots that I could print on a page or two and read over lunch. As a quick origin, this story gets the job done. i would like to know where the muck came from though. _________________ Consider it fixed!
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mrguy08 Class 100 Hero Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 223 Location: South Mississippi	Posted: Fri Jun 23, 2006 10:23 am    Post subject:   Yeah I don't know if you have an explanation for the muck or not but seeing as how this is taking place in the sewers underneath a prison, perhaps an escaped prisoner was running down here but he drowned in the sewer or something and his psychotic, rage-filled spirit, still lives down there and it inhabits this weird substance known as the muck which is able to take posession of this guy. Just a thought, you probably have your own explanation. _________________ Example of irony: Hippopotomonstrosesquippedaliophobia= fear of long words.
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Burning Brawler Bystander Joined: 30 May 2006 Posts: 14	Posted: Tue Jun 27, 2006 9:20 pm    Post subject:   Thanks And yeah, the red and black was his original costume, but in the story next week we should see his new costume. And the story of The Muck is something I'm working on. I need to find a valid beginning of the substance is all. But I will let you know that The Muck is very, very old.
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