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mrguy08
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 25, 2006 12:44 pm    Post subject: Part 3 Reply with quote
 
I've never played a Freedom Force game so I'm not really familiar with the characters or story or anything. I like what you've done so far with the crossing into different game franchises as different dimensions thing. I like it because its different and I don't think anyone else on the site has done it before. I still think you need to work on the dialogue though. It feels smashed together and difficult to comprehend.


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