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Ockham
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 31, 2006 2:03 pm    Post subject: The Courts Reply with quote
 
Very Nice MW!

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 31, 2006 2:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
 
I agree...damn nice MW.

I like the shading on the cross and around the characters, really gives it a cool feel.

Also, I SERIOUSLY wouldn't want to get kicked by that guy...his freakin quads are bigger than his waist! Guess he's not getting old and fat like some of us. Just you wait though mister...your time will come!

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Big Puerto Rico
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 31, 2006 2:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
 
Yes pretty good!!! Now, since you are a good artist I have to say something, pretty much everything is good, but both of their feet (the ones facing us) look like they are just floating there, not sure if you wanted that way but it looks a lil unatural. Solution? You ask. Simple lines where the foot would bend for the male (if you want to be simplistic)the female is not as easy though, move it up a lil mabe but hey its nothing big. That's all I found that was...wouldnt say wrong but I have no better word for it. Good job again.


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PostPosted: Wed Nov 01, 2006 7:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
 
yeah! Pretty good job man! the one thing i like the most about the picture is the scenario, that moon in the background gives it a somewhat mystic feeling....a very nice job indeed man! Very Happy


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Myths n' Wraiths
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 8:57 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
 
Thank you all for yuor comments. Sorry I did not reply sooner, but for some reason I never noticed the little orange flag that sais there were new comments in this section Embarassed .

I see what you are saying about the feet BPR, and it is a good point. The womans foot is supposed to be dangling but his was intended to be resting on the step and it does not give that impression. I think the reason for that is that I drew this in layers, drawing the characters rough outlines and main details seperately and then tracing them and adding the smaller details over top of the cross. That made for a few integration problems (the hand wasnt exactly in the right postion, the leg was to far out) I just missed that foot thing with him. Good eye BPR.

Yeah, he is a bit muscular. The guy who plays this toon ingame is a Deffender that thinks he is a Tank, and in all honestly he pulls it off pretty well. He is the only other person I have played with that can herd like PH does with his blaster Wink .So i wanted to give him that hard as stones look to match his personality.


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PostPosted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 1:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
 
I want to applaud you for doing a complete piece. You have a very balanced composition here man. I love it.


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Myths n' Wraiths
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 1:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
 
Thank you much Fix. Very Happy


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