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A Vision Unheeded

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fixit God-like Powers Joined: 01 May 2006 Posts: 605 Location: Utah	Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2007 2:13 pm    Post subject: A Vision Unheeded   Wow, Kirk had budding powers before the whole portal incident? That brings up a lot more questions. it's nice to see something from you again man. Though I have to wonder, the title... Kirk (aka the Vision) seemed to be what was unheeded. No one in his family seemed to take much stock in his "intuition" and the hospital didn't even notice when he just walked out. Later, we know the city of Paragon tells kirk to take a hike. _________________ Consider it fixed!
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Ockham Freedom Phalanx Founding Member Joined: 25 Apr 2006 Posts: 892 Location: I give a crap!	Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2007 2:37 pm    Post subject:   Nice tie in to what is to come. Pretty cool. The Statesman zings are so ROFL. _________________ Need a break from COH Fan Fiction? Try www.AnthonyHarte.com A Sci-Fi Fantasy Source.
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pastarican Class 100 Hero Joined: 01 May 2006 Posts: 221 Location: Ohio	Posted: Wed Jan 17, 2007 8:18 am    Post subject:   This was the very pared-down version. Had a lot more going on, but in the spirit of keeping it brief, did my best to make it short. This felt more like doing a watercolor painting (working quickly, more immediate in execution) as opposed to doing an oil (more deliberate, able to work slowly on it.) Strange comparison, but seems to make sense to me. Even gave Bianca a cameo. -M-
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Myths n' Wraiths Freedom Phalanx Founding Member Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 848 Location: I give a crap too ;) .	Posted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 1:42 am    Post subject:   Yeah, I loved the States thing you threw in there. Good little flash fiction Past. _________________ Murphey's Laws of Combat "A sucking chest wound is natures way of telling you to slow down."
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fixit God-like Powers Joined: 01 May 2006 Posts: 605 Location: Utah	Posted: Mon Jan 22, 2007 12:04 pm    Post subject:   I have to admit, the little news blip was well done. It shows how later, the issue totally blew over and no one cared anyomre. but we all know the truth. _________________ Consider it fixed!
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