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A Vision Unheeded

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fixit
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 16, 2007 2:13 pm    Post subject: A Vision Unheeded Reply with quote
 
Wow, Kirk had budding powers before the whole portal incident? That brings up a lot more questions.
it's nice to see something from you again man. Though I have to wonder, the title... Kirk (aka the Vision) seemed to be what was unheeded. No one in his family seemed to take much stock in his "intuition" and the hospital didn't even notice when he just walked out. Later, we know the city of Paragon tells kirk to take a hike.


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PostPosted: Tue Jan 16, 2007 2:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
 
Nice tie in to what is to come. Pretty cool.

Cool

The Statesman zings are so ROFL.


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PostPosted: Wed Jan 17, 2007 8:18 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
 
This was the very pared-down version. Had a lot more going on, but in the spirit of keeping it brief, did my best to make it short. This felt more like doing a watercolor painting (working quickly, more immediate in execution) as opposed to doing an oil (more deliberate, able to work slowly on it.) Strange comparison, but seems to make sense to me.

Even gave Bianca a cameo. Wink

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 1:42 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
 
Yeah, I loved the States thing you threw in there.

Good little flash fiction Past.


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PostPosted: Mon Jan 22, 2007 12:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
 
I have to admit, the little news blip was well done. It shows how later, the issue totally blew over and no one cared anyomre. but we all know the truth.


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