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Ockham Freedom Phalanx Founding Member Joined: 25 Apr 2006 Posts: 877 Location: I give a crap!	Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 9:58 am    Post subject: What Myths Are Made of   That was neat. I feel sad for Myth for losing her. _________________ Need a break from COH Fan Fiction? Try www.AnthonyHarte.com A Sci-Fi Fantasy Source.
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Vindea Policeman Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 44	Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 3:35 pm    Post subject:   I cried when I read it. Seriously, M&W has some serious stuff going on in that head of his. It was a wonderful story! Vindea p.s. sorry about not reading and reviewing more stories 3 babies in the house...
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PhoenixHawk Man of Steel Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 442 Location: as if anyone really gives a crap	Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 3:42 pm    Post subject:   Holy shit.... She speaks!!! THREE babies? Yikes. Ok about the story, I like this a lot. It brings real emotion into play, makes you really feel for Myth. I also like the way it's pointed out that not only can Myth feel the emotions around him, but they can feel his as well, and what an impact that can have. It's obvious there is very close familiarity with actual combat from reading this.
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RoboZon Man of Steel Joined: 28 Apr 2006 Posts: 276 Location: cloud 10 (forget cloud 9 it sucks)	Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 5:21 pm    Post subject:   wow that was amazing.... i loved the way all the emotion coursed the story _________________ "Life's battles don't always go to the stronger or faster man, but sooner or later the man who wins is the one who thinks he can." -bruce lee Eli J. Litzelman aka RoboZon
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Myths n' Wraiths Freedom Phalanx Founding Member Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 832 Location: I give a crap too ;) .	Posted: Thu Jan 25, 2007 7:45 am    Post subject:   Thank you much everyone for the kind the reviews. Fix really set the bar high for this series with Red Rage and in all honesty it really served as a form of isnperation for me while writing this one. I know that you have already written your main character's 'Rikti history' PH, but I gotta say I would love to see you make an addition to this series. ... you know you want to . _________________ Murphey's Laws of Combat "A sucking chest wound is natures way of telling you to slow down."
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PhoenixHawk Man of Steel Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 442 Location: as if anyone really gives a crap	Posted: Thu Jan 25, 2007 9:56 am    Post subject:   I'll get to work on it... I still have all kinds of Chapter 16 to write! D
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PhoenixHawk Man of Steel Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 442 Location: as if anyone really gives a crap	Posted: Thu Jan 25, 2007 11:32 am    Post subject:   Ok...it's done. It'll be posted next week. As MW said, I've already written my main character's Rikti night...so I wrote the events from a different perspective. It's a quickie, and isn't nearly as emotionally compelling as MW's entry, and doesn't have the cool, gives you shivers, ending that Tropics did, but hopefully it'll be a neat look into another of my characters. D
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Ockham Freedom Phalanx Founding Member Joined: 25 Apr 2006 Posts: 877 Location: I give a crap!	Posted: Thu Jan 25, 2007 12:11 pm    Post subject:   Damn that was fast. Can I have the completed work of From the Ashes this afternoon? Just thought I'd ask. _________________ Need a break from COH Fan Fiction? Try www.AnthonyHarte.com A Sci-Fi Fantasy Source.
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Vindea Policeman Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 44	Posted: Thu Jan 25, 2007 12:14 pm    Post subject:   [quote="PhoenixHawk"]Holy shit.... She speaks!!! /quote] Smartass...
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PhoenixHawk Man of Steel Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 442 Location: as if anyone really gives a crap	Posted: Thu Jan 25, 2007 4:04 pm    Post subject:
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Ockham Freedom Phalanx Founding Member Joined: 25 Apr 2006 Posts: 877 Location: I give a crap!	Posted: Thu Jan 25, 2007 4:09 pm    Post subject:   Typical. _________________ Need a break from COH Fan Fiction? Try www.AnthonyHarte.com A Sci-Fi Fantasy Source.
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Myths n' Wraiths Freedom Phalanx Founding Member Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 832 Location: I give a crap too ;) .	Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2007 1:51 am    Post subject:   Quote: Damn that was fast. No kidding. An hour and a half... wish I could toss them out like that. _________________ Murphey's Laws of Combat "A sucking chest wound is natures way of telling you to slow down."
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PhoenixHawk Man of Steel Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 442 Location: as if anyone really gives a crap	Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2007 3:06 am    Post subject:   Well, it may come across as rushed...guess we'll have to see. I could post the link for you guys, but I have this weird thing that it'd be stepping on Tropic's toes. So guess it'll have to wait for the update next week. Actually I thought it took a long time. I mean, I knew the general idea of what I would write, and just made the specifics come out, but it felt like I was typing forever. It's only 1650 words or so long, so an hour and a half seems long to me. maybe I just have a weird outlook on it. D
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fixit God-like Powers Joined: 01 May 2006 Posts: 605 Location: Utah	Posted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 12:51 am    Post subject:   OK, I know I'm WAY behind the curve here, and it is very hard to say in a new way what everyone has already said, but I have never understood Myth and what makes him tick better than I did in this short story. This was exactly what I had in mind for these little one shots. _________________ Consider it fixed!
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Myths n' Wraiths Freedom Phalanx Founding Member Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 832 Location: I give a crap too ;) .	Posted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 7:28 am    Post subject:   Much thanks Fix, and don't worry about being late. You had a good reason. This was not at all what I originaly intended for Myth's Rikti War experience. In fact when I wrote the outline for the story this was just a minor scene but when you put out Red Rage the insperation kind of hit home and heres what came out. I have to say, this joint effort series has been alot of fun to read and keep up with. I think this whole flash-fiction thing might just be alright . The strength to this series really is that so many people are getting involved with it. A quick flash fiction in and of itself is not powerful enough to project the overwelming loss of an event like this invasion but when you hear story after story of loss and sacrifice and heroism it makes it feel so much more human. Almost as if you are going through the history book reading the eye-witness accounts of some horrible war. _________________ Murphey's Laws of Combat "A sucking chest wound is natures way of telling you to slow down."
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