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Myths n' Wraiths Freedom Phalanx Founding Member Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 831 Location: I give a crap too ;) .	Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 7:51 am    Post subject: Fix This   So he ditches a 'broad' who is cuasing him too much heartburn and heads to Paragan where he gets his bike torched by a plasma rifle and runs into an alien invasion... me personaly, i think i might have tried to go back and work it out with the girl . Ahhh who am i kidding . Fight on Fix. _________________ Murphey's Laws of Combat "A sucking chest wound is natures way of telling you to slow down."
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pastarican Class 100 Hero Joined: 01 May 2006 Posts: 221 Location: Ohio	Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 6:04 pm    Post subject:   And apparently, he rescued Red Sniper as well...Well done! -M-
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pastarican Class 100 Hero Joined: 01 May 2006 Posts: 221 Location: Ohio	Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 6:06 pm    Post subject:   Oh...I forgot...nice Statesy-bash, too! -M-
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PhoenixHawk Man of Steel Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 442 Location: as if anyone really gives a crap	Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 6:30 pm    Post subject:   I like the look back opening...very nice touch. And the Stateman bash made me smile outright. Great addition Fix. D
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RoboZon Man of Steel Joined: 28 Apr 2006 Posts: 276 Location: cloud 10 (forget cloud 9 it sucks)	Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 9:22 pm    Post subject:   i liked the mention of how he got pulled over for not having a helmet and how he wouldnt turn back great read _________________ "Life's battles don't always go to the stronger or faster man, but sooner or later the man who wins is the one who thinks he can." -bruce lee Eli J. Litzelman aka RoboZon
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