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Myths n' Wraiths
Freedom Phalanx Founding Member


Joined: 26 Apr 2006
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 7:01 am    Post subject: Prologue Reply with quote
 
What has that dude gotten himself into now? Nice prolugue Robo. Good suspense builder, informative, nice intro to the characters and even a snip of humor. Good work man.


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Ockham
Freedom Phalanx Founding Member


Joined: 25 Apr 2006
Posts: 877
Location: I give a crap!

PostPosted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 1:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
 
The board is set.

Now move the pawns.

Only in time we the true motives be seen.

Muwhahaha!


Nice one Robo! Smile


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RoboZon
Man of Steel


Joined: 28 Apr 2006
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Location: cloud 10 (forget cloud 9 it sucks)

PostPosted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 11:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
 
thanks guys it was really fun to write... the characters kinda made themselves
hoping to get more done soon


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Altec
Policeman


Joined: 30 Jan 2007
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Location: The U of K

PostPosted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 5:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
 
Seems its Ninja week on the CoH Writers guild Laughing Very nice RoboSan errr i mean RoboZon Wink


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pastarican
Class 100 Hero


Joined: 01 May 2006
Posts: 221
Location: Ohio

PostPosted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 5:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
 
One can never have too many ninjas...

-M-

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fixit
God-like Powers


Joined: 01 May 2006
Posts: 605
Location: Utah

PostPosted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 5:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
 
Ninjas are cool.
I liked the Archon getting his ass handed to him because of a chair. That was great. RoboZon had beeter be on his game.


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RoboZon
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 7:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
 
thanks for the comments guys
looking to have more out soon Very Happy


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