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Ockham Freedom Phalanx Founding Member Joined: 25 Apr 2006 Posts: 877 Location: I give a crap!	Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 8:02 am    Post subject: A Simple Discovery   Well, I don't think this classifies as a "true" story, but more of a prologue. I have been wanting to write the reactions of some who know of the ancient battles for a long time now. This will probably be further expanded with a Pieces of Eight when Occam's Razar speaks with Ganymede. Since the Dragons everyones remembers and mostly have written about are after the Saurian curse this should sew my "vision" to CoH furhter now. Razar has gone to lengths to correct the lies of Beowulf and his father. He admits what was written down was probably verbally passed down and changed to match the "new' form of Dragons. _________________ Need a break from COH Fan Fiction? Try www.AnthonyHarte.com A Sci-Fi Fantasy Source.
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PhoenixHawk Man of Steel Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 442 Location: as if anyone really gives a crap	Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 4:40 pm    Post subject:   I think this is another great addition to this short series. I really like the implication that Crey knew about the Rikti prior to the invasion, and maybe had a hand in it? And yet again this ties into the cannon built here, hinting that there is something building that the Gods have planned and kept in motion for eons, to prepare for a coming storm. Nice job. D
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pastarican Class 100 Hero Joined: 01 May 2006 Posts: 221 Location: Ohio	Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2007 9:38 am    Post subject:   The fact that the "good" doctor almost spilled the beans as to the identity of the invaders pretty much confirms Crey knew about them. Very cool, though. It would be a great springboard for a "conspiracy theory" type story. -M-
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Ockham Freedom Phalanx Founding Member Joined: 25 Apr 2006 Posts: 877 Location: I give a crap!	Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2007 9:52 am    Post subject:   If I remember my history correctly (or if t didn't change) Crey's Folly was named because it took the brunt of the attack. I am not aware of any storylines leading to Crey's involvement in any pre-invasion activities, becuase Razar is only 40.3. IMHO since Crey seems to have gotten hit hard they were involved in some aspect. May they drew the attention of Rikti. We do learn Crey did have some Portal technology too. So I just tapped off that using the nearest conspiracy theory. I was looking forward to the thurd CoH novel The Rikti War, to explain some of it, but since its been called off for the time being who knows. I am sure we could come up with somehting equally as cool. _________________ Need a break from COH Fan Fiction? Try www.AnthonyHarte.com A Sci-Fi Fantasy Source.
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pastarican Class 100 Hero Joined: 01 May 2006 Posts: 221 Location: Ohio	Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2007 10:42 am    Post subject:   Like we haven't already.... -M-
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Myths n' Wraiths Freedom Phalanx Founding Member Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 832 Location: I give a crap too ;) .	Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 1:13 am    Post subject:   So so late, and duely embarassed to be so. Good story Ock. A plot driven by dialogue... something I find VERY difficult to do. Most certainly a nice addition to the Falling Sky set. _________________ Murphey's Laws of Combat "A sucking chest wound is natures way of telling you to slow down."
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VuDu DawL Sidekick Joined: 17 Dec 2007 Posts: 64 Location: State of Confusion	Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 11:02 am    Post subject:   Well, even though it is nearly a year late... I am finally getting time to actually go back and catch up at reading all the stories. This is a great story and made me very curious about this mysterious creature. I, too, liked the insinuation that Crey had prior knowledge of the Rikti. It definitely leaves a reader wanting to know more. _________________ My City of Heroes Fan Ficiton pages: http://coh.iswiz.com The Action Zone - a City of Heroes/Villains screenshot gallery: http://coh.iswiz.com/gallery/index.php Send your favorite screenshot as an E-card!
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Ockham Freedom Phalanx Founding Member Joined: 25 Apr 2006 Posts: 877 Location: I give a crap!	Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 9:35 pm    Post subject:   Alas, the third City of Heroes novel lay empty. Never to live in the annuals of time. We may never know the "true" involvement with Crey. Or maybe we already do? No review is ever late. It arrives when it was meant to. Thanks for taking the time to review, all comments are welcome. _________________ Need a break from COH Fan Fiction? Try www.AnthonyHarte.com A Sci-Fi Fantasy Source.
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VuDu DawL Sidekick Joined: 17 Dec 2007 Posts: 64 Location: State of Confusion	Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 9:59 pm    Post subject:   I searched the art for a picture. This story is about Razar, right? Do you have any pictures online? Or did I just somehow miss them? _________________ My City of Heroes Fan Ficiton pages: http://coh.iswiz.com The Action Zone - a City of Heroes/Villains screenshot gallery: http://coh.iswiz.com/gallery/index.php Send your favorite screenshot as an E-card!
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Myths n' Wraiths Freedom Phalanx Founding Member Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 832 Location: I give a crap too ;) .	Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 10:00 am    Post subject:   You picked a great series to start with Dee. Falling Sky has some great shorts in it. This joint project was kicked off by Fixit a while back (should really check out his aditions) and alot of people jumped on board including Tropic and PhoenixHawk (should read theirs too.... on second thought just read anything labeled Falling Sky.) _________________ Murphey's Laws of Combat "A sucking chest wound is natures way of telling you to slow down."
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Ockham Freedom Phalanx Founding Member Joined: 25 Apr 2006 Posts: 877 Location: I give a crap!	Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 12:25 pm    Post subject:   I wrote A Simple Ending over two years ago, maybe two and half now. I followed that with Stormy Knight Errant and Collusions of Grandeur. I think I then wrote Shades of Crey: Issue 1. I have actually started Issue 2, but it is incomplete. I have planned out up to 4, but don't know if they ever get finished. Some of my other stories actually have hints to the storyline. Then came Not the Hero, which I plan to re-format, and I believe I had started Pieces of Eight by then. The latter can only be view by story, becuase all the individual stories do not show up under search by Author. Then I wrote A Simple Discovery, and yes it is Occam's Razar. The only picture I can think of right now is thie Shades of Crey poster. This actually has been updated I just need to send it in. I was able to make a better Protector uniform. Oh, what the hell, here's the links for Pieces of Eight (CoH Flash Fiction (Recommended reading after everything else.)) Pieces of Eight: The Dammed Pieces of Eight: The Results Pieces of Eight: The Feeding Pieces of Eight: A Simple Meeting Pieces of Eight: Rescue Me Pieces of Eight: The Calling I have been meaning to post more pictures, maybe I'll use this as an excuse to dig some up. _________________ Need a break from COH Fan Fiction? Try www.AnthonyHarte.com A Sci-Fi Fantasy Source.
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