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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 5:19 pm Post subject: Loverly
Ok, I only got half way through it becuase I have to head to work, but this story is hilarious. I missed out on chapter one so I have got to go back and catch up, but believe me, after what i read it will be a high priority.
I didn't get to any action scenes or anything like that but your dialogue is very entertaining and well done IMO. Loved what I read so far.
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