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Myths n' Wraiths Freedom Phalanx Founding Member Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 848 Location: I give a crap too ;) .	Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 6:28 pm    Post subject: Introducing   I like the title. Lets you know what you're getting into Nice story Rebecca. Relatively brief and to the point but enjoyably so. Nice humor and good characters. I find one of the most amusing facts that a guy with a name like Snow Plow would be a ladies man. PErhaps a little overcompensating . Hehe anyway, I say again, good story. _________________ Murphey's Laws of Combat "A sucking chest wound is natures way of telling you to slow down."
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fixit God-like Powers Joined: 01 May 2006 Posts: 605 Location: Utah	Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 7:02 pm    Post subject:   It was not an exceptionally deep tale of intrigue and woe, but it was fun. A new hottie in town, Snowplow the womanizer, the team girl who is bitter because she is always overlooked and the two "other guys" that round out the team. The "violet fem" thing made me chuckle. Though I must admit, i would probably act more like Snowplow, in game, except you never know if the chick you're talking to is really a hottie or a three hundred pound guy. _________________ Consider it fixed!
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Altec Policeman Joined: 30 Jan 2007 Posts: 31 Location: The U of K	Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 9:37 pm    Post subject:   Ah yes i remember those days Fixit, when men were men and women were......errr also....men.... Did I miss a meeting?? I must admit Rebecca I saw your new story and having not exactly read your others im ashamed to say (You know the world isnt going to dominate itself all on its own ) Went back and read them. Im enjoying what i have read so far. I remember my first frostfire mission the tense battles up to the higher floors, a group of heroes battle hardened in that baptisim of fire and ice......seeing who could slide the furthest on the ice slide on the seco......Ahem I Digress. Hope to see the third part soon or barring that the second part of Termons story which i have a strange feeling will intersect this one or i could be way off the mark as normal _________________ "Who was that masked man?"
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PhoenixHawk Man of Steel Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 442 Location: as if anyone really gives a crap	Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 1:10 am    Post subject:   I agree, this was a fun reminder of the running through the hell of the Hollows at lvl 10, desperately trying to avoid the lvl 16 pummicites. The banter between the group is also a reminder of the day when pickup groups didn't usually turn out to be nightmares. Looking forward to the next installment of this. D
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pastarican Class 100 Hero Joined: 01 May 2006 Posts: 221 Location: Ohio	Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 6:55 am    Post subject:   This was a fun read. Felt in-game, but I liked the banter and camraderie between the members. Sonic's behavior reminds me a bit of one of the stories in the City of Flame series. I think the heroine got so tired of being hit on she beat the guy up. At any rate, this was a fun little chapter. Can't wait to see more. -M-
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RoboZon Man of Steel Joined: 28 Apr 2006 Posts: 276 Location: cloud 10 (forget cloud 9 it sucks)	Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 2:14 am    Post subject:   sorry for commenting late... very busy week great story.... as mentioned before by others... the banter was great a little note... when writing try and avoid slang... such as u instead of you... great for IMing but a little hard reading stories... although thats just my personal preference once again good story _________________ "Life's battles don't always go to the stronger or faster man, but sooner or later the man who wins is the one who thinks he can." -bruce lee Eli J. Litzelman aka RoboZon
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Ockham Freedom Phalanx Founding Member Joined: 25 Apr 2006 Posts: 892 Location: I give a crap!	Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 1:12 pm    Post subject:   I pretty much echo everything already set. The story put the action in the back seat and focued on characters. All good. Reminds of a mission recently. Three Masterminds quoting movies while our minions did all the work. That's what this game is about. _________________ Need a break from COH Fan Fiction? Try www.AnthonyHarte.com A Sci-Fi Fantasy Source.
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PhoenixHawk Man of Steel Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 442 Location: as if anyone really gives a crap	Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 1:27 am    Post subject:   That was one of the most fun missions I've ever done. D
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Vindea Policeman Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 44	Posted: Fri Apr 13, 2007 9:59 am    Post subject:   Funny little story! Snowplow reminds me of a fellow I went to high school with, and the way he used to treat me, until I slapped him. Slight grammatical errors, but I am nitpicky like that, just ask MW. I am so into this style of writing that I can read and review a story while the Bella is asleepin'. Sorry about the late post, Mum's computer isn't the fine piece of machinery that I am used to with mine. Vindea
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