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Big Puerto Rico Class 100 Hero Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 161 Location: Cali	Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 10:36 pm    Post subject: Yes,   as I sat here and saw that there where no stories and i had time to actually read i noticed i didn't know what was currently going on so i just wrote, some times you have to get back to your roots, hope you like. i took a different approach, was trying it out, of course give me your opinions cause i can use it!!! _________________ Till next time Big PR. "I believe the key to happiness is: some one to love, something to do, and something to look forward to." I roam in many places but mostly on the Triumph server.
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Myths n' Wraiths Freedom Phalanx Founding Member Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 832 Location: I give a crap too ;) .	Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 7:20 am    Post subject:   Hey BPR, Nice too see you post again, as always. I like the story man, it was a bit hard to follow since it was dialogue driven and I think anyone who doesnt have a working knowledge of your characters and their history probably would have been lost, but still not bad. Your writing reflects how you play the game. You are just all about having a good time and it shows in your writing. Even your more serious characters have a lighter side to them and all portray classic personalities. _________________ Murphey's Laws of Combat "A sucking chest wound is natures way of telling you to slow down."
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Big Puerto Rico Class 100 Hero Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 161 Location: Cali	Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2007 1:34 pm    Post subject:   thanks, i had decided to just have dialouge period, just to give it a shot, it was all right but as you can see it may leave people confused, and oddly enough the title is Clarity, lmao man that is priceless. _________________ Till next time Big PR. "I believe the key to happiness is: some one to love, something to do, and something to look forward to." I roam in many places but mostly on the Triumph server.
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