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Myths n' Wraiths Freedom Phalanx Founding Member Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 848 Location: I give a crap too ;) .	Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2006 12:06 pm    Post subject: Part 4   Dude, the ending was truely awsome. Loved it. Laughed like crazy. You even threw the "blast the daylights" thing it was too good . Dont get me wrong i liked the rest of the story too, but the ending was so good I forgot the rest of the tale lol. _________________ Murphey's Laws of Combat "A sucking chest wound is natures way of telling you to slow down."
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Ockham Freedom Phalanx Founding Member Joined: 25 Apr 2006 Posts: 892 Location: I give a crap!	Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2006 12:28 pm    Post subject:   That was great. You completely captured that state of the game and blended it with your work. _________________ Need a break from COH Fan Fiction? Try www.AnthonyHarte.com A Sci-Fi Fantasy Source.
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mrguy08 Class 100 Hero Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 223 Location: South Mississippi	Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2006 5:17 pm    Post subject:   Oh yeah teh W00t being a magic hero and the blasted the living daylights thing was awesome. I agree with MW I pretty much forgot about the rest of the chapter with how awesome and hilarious the ending was. w0000000000000000t!
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pastarican Class 100 Hero Joined: 01 May 2006 Posts: 221 Location: Ohio	Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2006 6:18 pm    Post subject:   Is that the same The Woot from your part of The Game? He seems like he'd be a great punching bag, er, uhm, character. -M-
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Spectreblade Class 100 Hero Joined: 25 Apr 2006 Posts: 120 Location: Philadelphia, PA	Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2006 11:20 pm    Post subject:   He's not quite the same guy, but he plays the same role as t3h 00b3r 1337 5ki11xx0rz (or whatever overwrought leetspeak spelling I used) from The Game; namely, a satire of the Powerleveling/ Sell Your Character's Soul For Uberness mentality, put in the story for comic relief. Hey, now that I mention that, his magic origin makes sense now, lol! I'm glad you liked it. But I think I might've gone too far with that scene, since it seems to be overshadowing the rest of the story. What did you think of the rest of it? _________________ It is a mistake to fancy that horror is associated inextricably with darkness, silence, and solitude. I found it in the glare of midafternoon, in the clangour of a metropolis...
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pastarican Class 100 Hero Joined: 01 May 2006 Posts: 221 Location: Ohio	Posted: Wed Aug 23, 2006 8:01 am    Post subject:   That happens a lot in movies, SB. Sometimes a particular scene really gets people's attention. In this case, you have a character who's intellect is questionable, yet he's pretty cocky. He's not written in as a serious character, but he's still liked. Think about the Dragonlance series: for the most part, it was serious, but whenever Gully Dwarves were written into the scene, things got silly. I think Armorbound coming into MAGI (a pretty ballsy move on his part,) is a great stopping point. Can't wait to see what happens next. -M-
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Myths n' Wraiths Freedom Phalanx Founding Member Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 848 Location: I give a crap too ;) .	Posted: Wed Aug 23, 2006 8:17 am    Post subject:   Ok, as for the rest of the tale. I think I said this before on one of the early chapters but i will say it again anyway. You do an awsome job at juggling the different characters, especialy so since most of them are not characters that you made up. I like how you bound between each character giving them dialogue that I could honestly believe came from their original creators. _________________ Murphey's Laws of Combat "A sucking chest wound is natures way of telling you to slow down."
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PhoenixHawk Man of Steel Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 442 Location: as if anyone really gives a crap	Posted: Wed Aug 23, 2006 7:24 pm    Post subject:   Quote: “Just great,” Voltech shouted. “News Flash and I already got barfed on once today!” I gotta say, this made me laugh out loud. Nothing makes a day brighter like a little zombie vomit. D
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