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Spark's Policeman Joined: 28 Jul 2006 Posts: 26 Location: Reeders, Pennsylvania	Posted: Sun Sep 17, 2006 3:14 pm    Post subject: Part 4   Here it is kids, the grand finale. Sorry for the lateness of this entry, but i couldn't use the computer for a while. I hope you like it.
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mrguy08 Class 100 Hero Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 223 Location: South Mississippi	Posted: Fri Sep 22, 2006 9:21 pm    Post subject:   Quote: Then it hit me like a chick who just caught Uncle Pat starring at her ass. Thats hilarious I really love your sense of humor in this story. Its incredibly funny and definitely one of the best things about this story because it helps us to get a great sense of character across as well. Beyond that I don't have that much. It's a fine tale and that recurring quote throughout it all (God doth loveth his little jokeths) is a nice part of it as well. _________________ Example of irony: Hippopotomonstrosesquippedaliophobia= fear of long words.
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Spark's Policeman Joined: 28 Jul 2006 Posts: 26 Location: Reeders, Pennsylvania	Posted: Sat Sep 23, 2006 1:31 am    Post subject: thanks   thanks guy. expect more stories about Spark's and other characters around him ASAP
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fixit God-like Powers Joined: 01 May 2006 Posts: 605 Location: Utah	Posted: Sat Sep 23, 2006 11:49 am    Post subject:   I am always wary of first person perspective stories because they can be so cut and dry. But because of your sense of humor and use of slang and tangents, I really enjoyed this one from start to finish. Plus with all the "serious" stories out right now, it's nice t o read a fun one. _________________ Consider it fixed!
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Spark's Policeman Joined: 28 Jul 2006 Posts: 26 Location: Reeders, Pennsylvania	Posted: Sat Sep 23, 2006 12:55 pm    Post subject: Thanks   Thanks Fixit. I belive laughter is a unversal language that must be spoken. So, i try to interject as much humor into my life as i can.
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