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Myths n' Wraiths Freedom Phalanx Founding Member Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 848 Location: I give a crap too ;) .	Posted: Tue May 09, 2006 6:44 pm    Post subject: Part 12   Dude... how depressing. Nether is still dead, preppy boy not only looses his birthright but gets whacked (OK so its not nice to talk about people who are deing in a sewer liek that but I couldn't help myself ) and that chic still hasn't gotten her new breasts. Where is the justice in it all!?!? Good chapter though. My favorite part was the very quick but beautiful description of the sniper gettin' wasted . _________________ Murphey's Laws of Combat "A sucking chest wound is natures way of telling you to slow down."
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Voyager Class 100 Hero Joined: 28 Apr 2006 Posts: 130	Posted: Wed May 10, 2006 3:16 pm    Post subject:   I'm on an open agreement with my SG, that I can maim/mass murder/hurt/paralyze/castrate/burn/cook/meat grind/shoot/disgrace/rape/violate/nerf/placate/smack around/bitch slap/marry and or divorce or both/judge/execute/emprison/injure/exile/torture/adopt/disown/sue/cross dress/lobotomize the toons as I please, as long as they agree to it. The writing process requires that I clear it with them during the week, through PMs first, explaining my intention, then if they agree, I go ahead and write it down on week-ends. On as side, I'm happy to see that it is still read from time to time by my peers here. And yes, describing the final showdown between the sniper and Frank WInters was longer at first, but then I felt it had to be shortened, a lot, to give the impression that it was all happening to fast.
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Myths n' Wraiths Freedom Phalanx Founding Member Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 848 Location: I give a crap too ;) .	Posted: Wed May 10, 2006 3:21 pm    Post subject:   Pacing scenes like that can be tough. Do you use crystalised moments or do you use battle fog? You chose well. _________________ Murphey's Laws of Combat "A sucking chest wound is natures way of telling you to slow down."
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Voyager Class 100 Hero Joined: 28 Apr 2006 Posts: 130	Posted: Wed May 10, 2006 3:25 pm    Post subject:   Myths n' Wraiths wrote: Pacing scenes like that can be tough. Do you use crystalised moments or do you use battle fog? You chose well. Desperation
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