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Myths n' Wraiths Freedom Phalanx Founding Member Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 832 Location: I give a crap too ;) .	Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 10:00 am    Post subject: Part 1   Woohoo, first post. Id like to start by saying Quote: Volt concluded he just bought stacks of the same thing. That is soooo me . Anywho, good stuff, as I mentioned before. Despite the fact that my favorite character is dying at the moment I am impressed with the tale so far. Your gift for description is your strong point man, keep up the work and stay focused in those boring English classes and your grammer skills will catch up. Dont be like me at 23 and still cant figure out where to put my punctuations . _________________ Murphey's Laws of Combat "A sucking chest wound is natures way of telling you to slow down."
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Ockham Freedom Phalanx Founding Member Joined: 25 Apr 2006 Posts: 877 Location: I give a crap!	Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 10:22 am    Post subject:   What is Quote: punctuations And where can I buy theses items of power? Good story Volt. I am gonna have to twist your arm to make you edit though aren't I. I think RIP might enjoy it though. _________________ Need a break from COH Fan Fiction? Try www.AnthonyHarte.com A Sci-Fi Fantasy Source.
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Myths n' Wraiths Freedom Phalanx Founding Member Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 832 Location: I give a crap too ;) .	Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 10:25 am    Post subject:   Punc-tu-a-tion Quote: the practice or system of using certain conventional marks or characters in writing or printing in order to separate elements and make the meaning clear, as in ending a sentence or separating clauses. _________________ Murphey's Laws of Combat "A sucking chest wound is natures way of telling you to slow down."
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Ockham Freedom Phalanx Founding Member Joined: 25 Apr 2006 Posts: 877 Location: I give a crap!	Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 10:34 am    Post subject:   Thanks. _________________ Need a break from COH Fan Fiction? Try www.AnthonyHarte.com A Sci-Fi Fantasy Source.
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Voltech Class 100 Hero Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 152 Location: in front of the computer	Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 6:04 pm    Post subject:   i hate editing, everything looks fine to me since i wrote it . and as for grammar and punctuation all i have to say to that is that i hav enothing to say to that as for the item of power that is being use by the Warrior they are now in the hands of Myth who keeps them in his base. if u find the base u find the gloves. _________________ I didn't 'cause I could if i wanted too ~T.H.
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fixit God-like Powers Joined: 01 May 2006 Posts: 605 Location: Utah	Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 6:55 pm    Post subject:   I agree with Ock that this needs editing, but it is a very engrosing tale. I think my favorite part was Volt's fast talking as he jumped onto the ship. And what the heck are you doing ending it right there?! C'mon man, you can't just leave it hanging, we need the rest. _________________ Consider it fixed!
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Myths n' Wraiths Freedom Phalanx Founding Member Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 832 Location: I give a crap too ;) .	Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 6:26 am    Post subject:   Quote: they are now in the hands of Myth who keeps them in his base. if u find the base u find the gloves. He uses them to dust with now that they have that spiffy static effect, so no, you cant have them =P. _________________ Murphey's Laws of Combat "A sucking chest wound is natures way of telling you to slow down."
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Voltech Class 100 Hero Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 152 Location: in front of the computer	Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 5:31 pm    Post subject:   i left it hanging so u would ask "why did you just leave it hanging" dont worry its worth the wait, and the ending will be quite a suprise [/quote] _________________ I didn't 'cause I could if i wanted too ~T.H.
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