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Chapter 2 pt1

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Riotmech Class 100 Hero Joined: 27 Aug 2006 Posts: 148 Location: Home, staring at a blank screen	Posted: Wed Nov 08, 2006 12:12 pm    Post subject: Chapter 2 pt1   ok...i finally finished the first part of chapter 2....and i know it still sucks...but you gotta say! It is better then the last one no? I did as you asked give a bit more insight into Kai's life....personally his family...and also his starting training as the hero Aven....i dunno if you guys read it...and if you didn't, please do. Even if it's just to bring me down a notch or 2 _________________ -[ ]- Your so sad, maybe you should buy a Happy Meal -[]-
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Riotmech Class 100 Hero Joined: 27 Aug 2006 Posts: 148 Location: Home, staring at a blank screen	Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 10:24 am    Post subject:   . . .hum. . .guess no one's gonna read the story huh? aaw well it was fun while it lasted. . . _________________ -[ ]- Your so sad, maybe you should buy a Happy Meal -[]-
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Tropic Site Admin Joined: 25 Apr 2006 Posts: 302 Location: Florida	Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 12:13 pm    Post subject:   Hey man! Don't get discouraged! Just because no one has posted anything yet dosen't mean they haven't read it! And there are plenty of people who go to the site and read everything and never comment here so.... But I do have a confession to make...with all the stories, the posting, the art and real life I very rarely get a chance to read the very stuff I post! Shameful, I know but its a fact of life! So, just know that someone out there is reading and sooner or later someone will take up the challenge and post their POV here. Tropic
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Voyager Class 100 Hero Joined: 28 Apr 2006 Posts: 130	Posted: Sat Dec 02, 2006 3:59 pm    Post subject:   I went ahead, read it, but since you were looking for comments, I'll provide it, which I usually don't. Don't ask me why, hard to explain. Your introduction to chapter 2 was well started, but I mst admit that your comparison always resorted to either day or night, no shades of grey in them. That got to me. But it did show a sense of perspective in your writing worth exploring in the future. Chapter 2 was also short, and after reading the first paragraph, I was hoping to read more out of it. Keep it up, it's coming along well.
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