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Ed Frazee Guest	Posted: Wed Dec 13, 2006 7:56 pm    Post subject: Final Battle?   Hello everyone. First I just want to say that I'm honored and grateful for my story being posted. I submitted only to see if it was worthy of posting. When I was told that it WOULD be posted, I was happy. I know this story is a little rough and I didn't have my editor go over it, but I hope it's not too bad. It is something of a final scene to a much larger story. When I submitted the title, I titled it "Final Battle?" but it is ok that the '?' was left out. Since I've been playing CoX, I have been inspired by the characters that I have created. Over time I have created 20 characters and I love them all for different reasons. I look forward to continuing the story for everyone.
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fixit God-like Powers Joined: 01 May 2006 Posts: 605 Location: Utah	Posted: Wed Dec 13, 2006 8:13 pm    Post subject:   Ah, alt-itis. I suffer from it very deeply. I find myself waking up in the middle of the night to create a scottish looking character so that I can name him Woad Wage. (get it?) Welcome to the club. Here at CoH Writers Guild, we pride ourselves on our perfect writing (in which we never make a mistake, me especially) and our razor sharp wit. (by razor sharp, I refer more closely to rusty nails) Glad to have you aboard. _________________ Consider it fixed!
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Tropic Site Admin Joined: 25 Apr 2006 Posts: 295 Location: Florida	Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 1:55 am    Post subject:   AKKK! Darn punctution! i didn't even notice there was a '?' mark! I'll try to get in there and fix it next update! Trop
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Myths n' Wraiths Freedom Phalanx Founding Member Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 827 Location: I give a crap too ;) .	Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 5:36 am    Post subject:   Punctuation is a killer Yeah Trop isn't picky like those anal retentive ba- doh children might be around. I mean those guys over at the official CoH site. How else would I get my stories posted . Hope to hear more from you dude, but now I gotta finaly get the other stories read and reviewed. If you plan on sticking around then go ahead and set you up an account for the review forums. The more constructive reviews we get the better writers we become... well sorta. _________________ Murphey's Laws of Combat "A sucking chest wound is natures way of telling you to slow down."
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Dursagon Joined: 13 Dec 2006 Posts: 4 Location: Texas	Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 8:24 am    Post subject: Thank You   Thanks for the warm welcome. I got my account now and I choose my badguy toons name because he's a guy, and my main heroes character is female. I found that sticking with flareback like I do in the game confuses some people and I deal with enough confused people at work when they look at their computers......but that's another story.... Being married to a woman who has a Masters in Eng, I'm accustomed to anal correctiveness from others. (she HATES it when I say "can't not touch!") But I look forward to getting to know everyone. _________________ The older I get, the more I find I'm like my father. It's enough to make me scream!
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