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RoboZon Man of Steel Joined: 28 Apr 2006 Posts: 276 Location: cloud 10 (forget cloud 9 it sucks)	Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 3:12 am    Post subject: red rage   heh you beat me too it i was just writin a part for falling sky anyways great story it really expressed red sniper and how he became what he is really enjoyed reading it _________________ "Life's battles don't always go to the stronger or faster man, but sooner or later the man who wins is the one who thinks he can." -bruce lee Eli J. Litzelman aka RoboZon
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PhoenixHawk Man of Steel Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 442 Location: as if anyone really gives a crap	Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 4:46 am    Post subject:   Nice backgrounder for Red Sniper. Poor guy, lost his family, his mind, everything. This was short and to the point, and very cool. You can see how he turned out somewhat psycho before he lapsed into his coma. D
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Riotmech Class 100 Hero Joined: 27 Aug 2006 Posts: 148 Location: Home, staring at a blank screen	Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 10:38 am    Post subject:   MY GOD! THAT STORY WAS....AWSOME!! i could never have guessed that Red had worked as a processor in a bank! just totally awsome! _________________ -[ ]- Your so sad, maybe you should buy a Happy Meal -[]-
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fixit God-like Powers Joined: 01 May 2006 Posts: 605 Location: Utah	Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 12:10 pm    Post subject:   Thanks guys, I should be posting more regularly again. _________________ Consider it fixed!
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Ockham Freedom Phalanx Founding Member Joined: 25 Apr 2006 Posts: 877 Location: I give a crap!	Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 12:38 pm    Post subject:   Yah that is a pretty awesome origin. He and Sarah Starling share a similar malady. Although with her the Other Sarah developed the powers which caused some unusual circumstances. Maybe these two should hook up after if she ever awakens out of her coma. _________________ Need a break from COH Fan Fiction? Try www.AnthonyHarte.com A Sci-Fi Fantasy Source.
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pastarican Class 100 Hero Joined: 01 May 2006 Posts: 221 Location: Ohio	Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 5:44 pm    Post subject:   I agree...that was very cool...and in a very short amount of space, too! Does that mean the other Falling Sky pieces are one-shots as well? -M-
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fixit God-like Powers Joined: 01 May 2006 Posts: 605 Location: Utah	Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 6:03 pm    Post subject:   heh, it's funny... Much like the venerable Ockham is doing with his Po8, I am doing with FS. my idea was to keep my submissions between 1000 to 2000 words, with Red Rage falling right in at 1500ish. I have never heard of flash writing before, but so far, I like it. This was more the style I was doing when I first began posting here. I have to admit, i also like doing the larger pieces, so every now and again I will switch back and forth. Thanks for all the great feedback on this one. I love the Red Sniper, but the origin story my friend gave him about going mad because his socks kept turning pink in the wash, just didn't jive with the more serious tone I was trying to give my stories. So I stuck with the out of his mind aspect and changed everything else. Now you know. _________________ Consider it fixed!
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Myths n' Wraiths Freedom Phalanx Founding Member Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 832 Location: I give a crap too ;) .	Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 7:39 pm    Post subject:   The last several paragraphs will be in my head all day long Fix. That was some powerful writing and forutnately it was short enough for me to sneak it in before I go to work. Exceptional stuff man. I hope my own little addition can stand up to it... whenever I get it out _________________ Murphey's Laws of Combat "A sucking chest wound is natures way of telling you to slow down."
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