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Myths n' Wraiths Freedom Phalanx Founding Member Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 832 Location: I give a crap too ;) .	Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2007 8:27 am    Post subject: Sharp Deadly Knife   Short but oh soo sweet. Good flash Trop. I love that womans attitude _________________ Murphey's Laws of Combat "A sucking chest wound is natures way of telling you to slow down."
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Tropic Site Admin Joined: 25 Apr 2006 Posts: 302 Location: Florida	Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 12:12 pm    Post subject:   Thanks MW. I was trying to convey the type of personality she has as susinqutly (man, did I mess the spelling up on that one!) as possible. She's calm and ready to go, not understanding why she had to tell the girl to attack and out the window she goes! A fine mate indeed. (Shameless plug for Recurrence) I guess it musta been so short everyone else missed it! Trop
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Ockham Freedom Phalanx Founding Member Joined: 25 Apr 2006 Posts: 877 Location: I give a crap!	Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 1:04 pm    Post subject:   Right, after knowing about here her reaction was duh, hello girls what else should you be doing. I think as a villain you have proven, like Norman, they have more depth than people would give them credit for. They are not evil in the typical sense of the word. If anything it has greyed the ideals and made it a matter of perspective. RIPs are heroes to the people of the Rogue Isles succeeding where Crey failed with the program. She is a hero to her own people one they soon forget about I might add. I had been contemplating writing how Longbow, Wyvern, and Legacy Chain are viewed by the populace of the Rogue Isles. Much like the Council, Hellions, Skulls, etc. are viewed in Paragon City. Stories like this prove that in the small details lies great depth of character. See I didn't miss it. _________________ Need a break from COH Fan Fiction? Try www.AnthonyHarte.com A Sci-Fi Fantasy Source.
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PhoenixHawk Man of Steel Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 442 Location: as if anyone really gives a crap	Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 2:21 pm    Post subject:   I didn't miss it either...just got done with it. I agree with Ock about it showing depth of character for those we see as villains. Everyone has their own perception, and few think they are 'evil'. And it does show her personality very succinctly (http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/succinct). I think that's what you were trying to say D
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Myths n' Wraiths Freedom Phalanx Founding Member Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 832 Location: I give a crap too ;) .	Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 6:43 pm    Post subject:   Quote: I had been contemplating writing how Longbow, Wyvern, and Legacy Chain are viewed by the populace of the Rogue Isles. Much like the Council, Hellions, Skulls, etc. are viewed in Paragon City. I had been considering doing the same thing. Unfortunately what little time I can devote to writing must be given to completing the DTC series and another major project that I am working on. _________________ Murphey's Laws of Combat "A sucking chest wound is natures way of telling you to slow down."
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fixit God-like Powers Joined: 01 May 2006 Posts: 605 Location: Utah	Posted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 7:46 pm    Post subject:   When I saw this title, I knew who this was about about and couldn't wait to read it. I love Hecate. Any story with her in it always has my attention. I loved the referance to her realtion to Sabine. There were little details to be pulled from the short work which brought to the tale scope. As with anything I've read of yours, I loved it. She's hot. _________________ Consider it fixed!
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Tropic Site Admin Joined: 25 Apr 2006 Posts: 302 Location: Florida	Posted: Sat Feb 03, 2007 1:46 am    Post subject:   Well, fix, you're in luck. I think the next thing I'm gonna do is resolve the Hecate/Helene issue. Helene is back with the Knives. What lies has she told? Has she consolidated her power? Hecate is still an exile from her sisters. What of her daughters Sabine, Vicca, Nikita and Drea? And the sisters from Founders Falls? Will there be civil war within the Knives of Artemis? And what of the Oracle? Have Helene's schemes caused the death of a demi-god? And how with Sister Hecate deal with Tropic if he learns that it was Helene who was after his daugher? Can she stop him from exacting revenge? Does she even want to? Will Artemis intervine? Can I write one sentance without a question mark? Apparently not! Tropic
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RoboZon Man of Steel Joined: 28 Apr 2006 Posts: 276 Location: cloud 10 (forget cloud 9 it sucks)	Posted: Sat Feb 03, 2007 3:12 am    Post subject:   lol.... now i just cant wait to read your next story and BTW great addition to falling sky.... sorry my review came a little late... and as a consiquence i cant think of anything someone else hasnt said...... but great story really enjoyed _________________ "Life's battles don't always go to the stronger or faster man, but sooner or later the man who wins is the one who thinks he can." -bruce lee Eli J. Litzelman aka RoboZon
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