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Myths n' Wraiths Freedom Phalanx Founding Member

Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 827 Location: I give a crap too ;) .
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Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 6:40 am Post subject: Part 1 |
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Good visualization man. One of your best in my opinion. Looking forward to chapter 2.
Ohh and when you going to get on CoH again?
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PhoenixHawk Man of Steel

Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 442 Location: as if anyone really gives a crap
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Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 9:18 am Post subject: |
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I agree, definitely one of your best. I want to see where this is going.
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Ockham Freedom Phalanx Founding Member

Joined: 25 Apr 2006 Posts: 873 Location: I give a crap!
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Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 9:53 am Post subject: |
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Yes, there is measureable difference between this and even the most recent works. I think your improving man. You'll be out growing us before you know it.
Then you'll be leaving...
Good job!
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Voltech Class 100 Hero

Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 152 Location: in front of the computer
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Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 2:08 pm Post subject: |
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schools been so hectic ill be off and on CoH in long to short intervals between.
Leaving? who said anything about leaving?
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