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Ockham Freedom Phalanx Founding Member Joined: 25 Apr 2006 Posts: 873 Location: I give a crap!	Posted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 9:29 am    Post subject: Part 1   AAaaahhh! You murderer! Hmm, me thinks the elves were smater than I thought when they sent an elemental, Occam's Wall, to serve as the son of Grendel's bodyguard. To think off all the time he tried to convinvce the tanker to guard over Thauma Guard may have been premature. I might need to start taking roll of my dragonkin just in case she shows up. Occam's Razar... Check Ockham's Claw (Clone of Razar)... Check Norman Salazar... Check North Wind (Occam's Arrow)... Check Red Eagle (Ockham's Thunder)... Check S... Wait a minute... I ain't revealing anymore. You will get no death list from me! I think my only complaint is it's too short. I am so curious on how it will all unfold. _________________ Need a break from COH Fan Fiction? Try www.AnthonyHarte.com A Sci-Fi Fantasy Source.
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PhoenixHawk Man of Steel Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 442 Location: as if anyone really gives a crap	Posted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 12:30 pm    Post subject:   Nice quick piece. Very well set up making us immediately like the heroine who will be slain only moments later. I too want to see where this will go. D
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Altec Policeman Joined: 30 Jan 2007 Posts: 30 Location: The U of K	Posted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 4:48 pm    Post subject:   Thirding cant wait to see where this is going I'm interested in the connection between these dragon tainted, also who is the Drake she was goner fight before coming to our time and is he still around Now if you will excuse me I have to go put some of my dragon characters into the Dragons Protection Program _________________ They didn't come in peace. They came in a Mothership. Their going to be leaving in a bodybag! Invasion : Issue 10 This time its Personal!
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pastarican Class 100 Hero Joined: 01 May 2006 Posts: 221 Location: Ohio	Posted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 5:13 pm    Post subject:   She don't need no stinkin' list! She will find them, and kill them....or will she? -M-
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Vindea Policeman Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 44	Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 4:38 pm    Post subject:   I keep finding these stories that I actually have time to sit down and read while the Bella is asleep! It's so awesome! This story was very well written for such a short piece, and definitely left me wanting some more. Not too much more, the baby doesn't sleep THAT long! Vindea
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pastarican Class 100 Hero Joined: 01 May 2006 Posts: 221 Location: Ohio	Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 5:50 pm    Post subject:   Holy cow! I think that's the first time you've ever commented on anything I've written! Glad you liked it! -M-
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Myths n' Wraiths Freedom Phalanx Founding Member Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 827 Location: I give a crap too ;) .	Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 1:25 am    Post subject:   WAY too short Past, we better be getting the next instalment soon . Hehe, excellent chapter. If you were going for suspense then you hit the nail on the head. It seems like everytime you start posting RL seems to get me busy elsewhere but I will definitely be doing my best to follow this. _________________ Murphey's Laws of Combat "A sucking chest wound is natures way of telling you to slow down."
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fixit God-like Powers Joined: 01 May 2006 Posts: 605 Location: Utah	Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 8:36 pm    Post subject:   The whole time I was reading this, I couldn't help but anticipate the confrontation between her and Occam's Razar. It is gonna be so... COOL! _________________ Consider it fixed!
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