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Myths n' Wraiths Freedom Phalanx Founding Member

Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 832 Location: I give a crap too ;) .
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Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 7:01 am Post subject: Prologue |
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What has that dude gotten himself into now? Nice prolugue Robo. Good suspense builder, informative, nice intro to the characters and even a snip of humor. Good work man.
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Ockham Freedom Phalanx Founding Member

Joined: 25 Apr 2006 Posts: 877 Location: I give a crap!
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Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 1:57 pm Post subject: |
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The board is set.
Now move the pawns.
Only in time we the true motives be seen.
Muwhahaha!
Nice one Robo! 
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RoboZon Man of Steel

Joined: 28 Apr 2006 Posts: 276 Location: cloud 10 (forget cloud 9 it sucks)
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Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 11:45 pm Post subject: |
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thanks guys it was really fun to write... the characters kinda made themselves
hoping to get more done soon
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_________________ "Life's battles don't always go to the stronger or faster man, but sooner or later the man who wins is the one who thinks he can."
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Altec Policeman

Joined: 30 Jan 2007 Posts: 30 Location: The U of K
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Posted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 5:06 pm Post subject: |
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Seems its Ninja week on the CoH Writers guild Very nice RoboSan errr i mean RoboZon 
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pastarican Class 100 Hero
Joined: 01 May 2006 Posts: 221 Location: Ohio
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Posted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 5:18 pm Post subject: |
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One can never have too many ninjas...
-M-
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fixit God-like Powers

Joined: 01 May 2006 Posts: 605 Location: Utah
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Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 5:57 pm Post subject: |
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Ninjas are cool.
I liked the Archon getting his ass handed to him because of a chair. That was great. RoboZon had beeter be on his game.
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RoboZon Man of Steel

Joined: 28 Apr 2006 Posts: 276 Location: cloud 10 (forget cloud 9 it sucks)
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Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 7:35 pm Post subject: |
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thanks for the comments guys
looking to have more out soon 
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