Anywho, good story man. I love the fact that you center your stuff around the Rogue Isles and not Paragon, it gives you a creative edge and brings something new to the WG. You definitely have the skill it takes to paint your Villians in a believable light and making them someone we can relate to or empathise with.
Your plot has depth to it, we are passed the prologue and the first chapter and don't even know who we are up against. Good stuff. Keep it coming.
