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Myths n' Wraiths
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 3:09 am    Post subject: Part Three Reply with quote
 
So much for retirement. Oh well. Good stuff Robo. A little hightened intrigue with the new assasin present. I like the way you went with the mental and empotional aspect of the fight rather than the actualy physical actions. Very well done and interesting.


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Ockham
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 1:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
 
Sweet, death by flute.

What hidden intents lie with the new assassin?

Who has the hidden intents?

Ooo, I can't wait.


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RoboZon
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 9:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
 
thanks for the comments guys

i got the flute idea one day while watching a bunch of random videos
it appears that a flute that could be turned into a blow gun was a common weapon used by ninjas
i thought the blades where a nice touch

much much more to come Very Happy


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