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Myths n' Wraiths Freedom Phalanx Founding Member Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 827 Location: I give a crap too ;) .	Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 8:43 am    Post subject: I like her   Quote: I’m not going half way. How ‘unconfined’ can I go and still be decent?” What a gall . Seriously, good work on this one. I like how you took the time to give an individual personality to each of the characters she encountered, regardless of how brief their appearance was. Some very clever punch lines as well, the end especialy. You threw in a nice little flashback without making it a tedious life story. Good work all around. _________________ Murphey's Laws of Combat "A sucking chest wound is natures way of telling you to slow down."
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Voltech Class 100 Hero Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 152 Location: in front of the computer	Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 10:51 am    Post subject:   I saw this before hand and gotta say I really liked it as a beginning story. It brings in all the elements of a beginning, like meeting heroes getting a costume and the reasons behind it all and isn't drawn out. Unlike mine where someone has to fight good read! _________________ I didn't 'cause I could if i wanted too ~T.H.
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Ockham Freedom Phalanx Founding Member Joined: 25 Apr 2006 Posts: 873 Location: I give a crap!	Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 12:40 pm    Post subject:   I agree. I love the title and how it ties into Serge, very clever. Nice job! _________________ Need a break from COH Fan Fiction? Try www.AnthonyHarte.com A Sci-Fi Fantasy Source.
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Vindea Policeman Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 44	Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 12:54 pm    Post subject:   Just about fell out of my chair when I read the line about the costumes being stain resistant. Something tells me you were not talking about puke from a Vazilok. Such enjoyable stories to read! Vindea p.s. MW, unless you are willing to cough up the dough for an ungodly amount of plastic surgery, don't get any ideas about costumes.
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Voltech Class 100 Hero Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 152 Location: in front of the computer	Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 5:45 pm    Post subject:   for the record: i'm the one who suggested using that title. _________________ I didn't 'cause I could if i wanted too ~T.H.
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TealSwann Bystander Joined: 19 Mar 2007 Posts: 22 Location: Michigan	Posted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 1:31 pm    Post subject:   You're right Volt. Give credit where credit is due! Thanks! _________________ If you don't come back dirty....you didn't do it right.
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Ockham Freedom Phalanx Founding Member Joined: 25 Apr 2006 Posts: 873 Location: I give a crap!	Posted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 1:47 pm    Post subject:   Oh, no, don't give him any credit. His head will only get bigger. _________________ Need a break from COH Fan Fiction? Try www.AnthonyHarte.com A Sci-Fi Fantasy Source.
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Voltech Class 100 Hero Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 152 Location: in front of the computer	Posted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 2:46 pm    Post subject:   Quote: Oh, no, don't give him any credit. His head will only get bigger. impossible! I brag about what i can and congradulate when i can't brag and i help others so i can be apart of the bragging. plus my head can't get any bigger when writers like you keep bringing me down _________________ I didn't 'cause I could if i wanted too ~T.H.
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Ockham Freedom Phalanx Founding Member Joined: 25 Apr 2006 Posts: 873 Location: I give a crap!	Posted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 4:31 pm    Post subject:   Aw... Have a cookie! _________________ Need a break from COH Fan Fiction? Try www.AnthonyHarte.com A Sci-Fi Fantasy Source.
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Myths n' Wraiths Freedom Phalanx Founding Member Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 827 Location: I give a crap too ;) .	Posted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 6:07 am    Post subject:   ROFL. The love and brotherhood around here is staggering. _________________ Murphey's Laws of Combat "A sucking chest wound is natures way of telling you to slow down."
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