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Posted: Wed Apr 25, 2007 12:20 pm Post subject: very cool
I like this...it's short, right to the point. It draws Hecate out a little bit, gives us just a glimpse into her personality, and while there is action, it is brief and doesn't overshadow the characters.
I'm still not comfortable being vocal on the boards yet, but I received a nudge from a certain member *coughtropiccough* so hopefully I'll be posting more reviews.
I really enjoyed the little snippet of S.H.'s history. I think you set the scene well and I was amused with her fascination of 'modern' inventions. I agree with Phoenix, it gives us a nice insight without the battle taking over the story.
Keep 'em coming!
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