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RoboZon Man of Steel Joined: 28 Apr 2006 Posts: 276 Location: cloud 10 (forget cloud 9 it sucks)	Posted: Wed May 16, 2007 11:28 am    Post subject: God who?   great story i liked the way it was written... gave it a sence of realism it was also filled with alot of humor and that was good i thought it was funny that he related seeing a hero to have an encounter with god... i guess if id never seen a hero before.... i MIGHT think it was a little more as i said... great story the end really makes you think _________________ "Life's battles don't always go to the stronger or faster man, but sooner or later the man who wins is the one who thinks he can." -bruce lee Eli J. Litzelman aka RoboZon
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Ockham Freedom Phalanx Founding Member Joined: 25 Apr 2006 Posts: 873 Location: I give a crap!	Posted: Thu May 17, 2007 11:20 am    Post subject:   This was a neat insight into those citizens that the heroes protect. I can't help, but wonder if J was beginning to go mad though in his cell. I could almost see him starting a life of crime from that donut shop incident. Ah, what could have been. _________________ Need a break from COH Fan Fiction? Try www.AnthonyHarte.com A Sci-Fi Fantasy Source.
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darkeS Joined: 17 Jan 2007 Posts: 1 Location: North Carolina	Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 5:42 pm    Post subject: Thanks   Thank you for your kind words, I had a lot of fun writing the story. Yes I too believe he would have gone a little crazy had his life not been snuffed out so quickly and brutally. I often wonder what the simple lives of teh citizens would be like as I fly over their heads and protecting them as I would place akin to the way God watches over us, if you share that belief. So it only made sense that a simple person such as J would think a mighty man with a booming voice could be God on earth. It was intended to be a t-i-c story and I'm glad it generated a laugh or two _________________ I am Darkeshade I am the Darkness She is the Light When we stand together I am but a shadow of who I was.
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