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Myths n' Wraiths Freedom Phalanx Founding Member Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 832 Location: I give a crap too ;) .	Posted: Tue Oct 24, 2006 7:05 pm    Post subject: Part 2   This was good man. I loved the way you explained the suit. Very believable and descritive, right down to the tech manuel. Ended to soon. _________________ Murphey's Laws of Combat "A sucking chest wound is natures way of telling you to slow down."
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mrguy08 Class 100 Hero Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 223 Location: South Mississippi	Posted: Wed Oct 25, 2006 5:35 pm    Post subject:   I agree with Myth, I enjoy the believability of it and the idea of "the everyman's hero" coming out of the beat cops in Galaxy City. Also, your description of the suit felt very believable. I'm definitely enjoying this tale so far. _________________ Example of irony: Hippopotomonstrosesquippedaliophobia= fear of long words.
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