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Riotmech Class 100 Hero

Joined: 27 Aug 2006 Posts: 152 Location: Home, staring at a blank screen
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Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 10:37 am Post subject: Time to fight |
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Well, seems I've been the only one still writting about Falling Sky lately so, I was wondering what you guys think about Kai/Aven's work in this "Time stream" we shall say.
P.S. Anything is welcome. 
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Myths n' Wraiths Freedom Phalanx Founding Member

Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 880 Location: I give a crap too ;) .
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Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2007 5:00 pm Post subject: |
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Hey man. Was very well written. I liked the way you bounced from serious to comical so quickly. Good characters.
One critique, that last line was darn close to plagiarism.
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Riotmech Class 100 Hero

Joined: 27 Aug 2006 Posts: 152 Location: Home, staring at a blank screen
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Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2007 5:12 pm Post subject: |
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Yeah I know, I sent a pm to Trop telling him I'd taken a bit of his own FS story..
Still, I hope I didn't offend anyone.
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