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Riotmech Class 100 Hero Joined: 27 Aug 2006 Posts: 152 Location: Home, staring at a blank screen	Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 10:37 am    Post subject: Time to fight   Well, seems I've been the only one still writting about Falling Sky lately so, I was wondering what you guys think about Kai/Aven's work in this "Time stream" we shall say. P.S. Anything is welcome. _________________ -[ ]- Your so sad, maybe you should buy a Happy Meal -[]-
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Myths n' Wraiths Freedom Phalanx Founding Member Joined: 26 Apr 2006 Posts: 880 Location: I give a crap too ;) .	Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2007 5:00 pm    Post subject:   Hey man. Was very well written. I liked the way you bounced from serious to comical so quickly. Good characters. One critique, that last line was darn close to plagiarism. _________________ Murphey's Laws of Combat "A sucking chest wound is natures way of telling you to slow down."
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Riotmech Class 100 Hero Joined: 27 Aug 2006 Posts: 152 Location: Home, staring at a blank screen	Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2007 5:12 pm    Post subject:   Yeah I know, I sent a pm to Trop telling him I'd taken a bit of his own FS story.. Still, I hope I didn't offend anyone. _________________ -[ ]- Your so sad, maybe you should buy a Happy Meal -[]-
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