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Postby Myths n' Wraiths on Tue Feb 06, 2007 6:01 am

What has that dude gotten himself into now? Nice prolugue Robo. Good suspense builder, informative, nice intro to the characters and even a snip of humor. Good work man.
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Postby Ockham on Tue Feb 06, 2007 12:57 pm

The board is set.

Now move the pawns.

Only in time we the true motives be seen.

Muwhahaha!


Nice one Robo! :)
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Postby RoboZon on Tue Feb 06, 2007 10:45 pm

thanks guys it was really fun to write... the characters kinda made themselves
hoping to get more done soon
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Postby Altec on Tue Feb 27, 2007 4:06 pm

Seems its Ninja week on the CoH Writers guild :lol: Very nice RoboSan errr i mean RoboZon :wink:
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Postby pastarican on Tue Feb 27, 2007 4:18 pm

One can never have too many ninjas...

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Postby fixit on Fri Mar 02, 2007 4:57 pm

Ninjas are cool.
I liked the Archon getting his ass handed to him because of a chair. That was great. RoboZon had beeter be on his game.
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Postby RoboZon on Fri Mar 02, 2007 6:35 pm

thanks for the comments guys
looking to have more out soon :D
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