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Postby Myths n' Wraiths » Tue Oct 31, 2006 8:12 am

Another fine addition. I liked the added use of Paragons scenery to this one. The past few entries have been focused on what was going on in his house and life and that reference to the statue helped bring the setting back into the mix.
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