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Postby Myths n' Wraiths » Tue Feb 06, 2007 5:40 am

Good visualization man. One of your best in my opinion. Looking forward to chapter 2.

Ohh and when you going to get on CoH again?
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Postby PhoenixHawk » Tue Feb 06, 2007 8:18 am

I agree, definitely one of your best. I want to see where this is going.

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Postby Ockham » Tue Feb 06, 2007 8:53 am

Yes, there is measureable difference between this and even the most recent works. I think your improving man. You'll be out growing us before you know it.

:cry:

Then you'll be leaving...

Good job!
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Postby Voltech » Tue Feb 06, 2007 1:08 pm

schools been so hectic ill be off and on CoH in long to short intervals between.

Leaving? who said anything about leaving?
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