I love cookies But that aside, the rest of the story was great too. Excellent character development and depiction with a little action at the end to satiate the baser side.
Now if you will excuse me, it seems a raid on the Onami base is in order. The cookies shall be mine... oh never mind. Just got somemore from the wifey in a package.
Murphey's Laws of Combat
"A sucking chest wound is natures way of telling you to slow down."
OMG~ Eve is me, only purple! Seriously, I am the queen of cookies. Just ask MW.
I love your stories, they are so awesomely the perfect length. Who is the mysterious figure at the end? Don't keep us waiting too long (like I do. Perhaps MW can help me finish my story when he comes home in 2 weeks.)
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