CoH Writer's Guild Review

[Myths n' Wraiths]

A quick note, Bahumut=Behemoth. I hope no one finds that too distracting. I decided to take a little creative liscensing or whatever you want to call it for old times sake. Every character in this story has an in-game counterpart that I met early in my first year of playing CoH (with the exception of Haven) and in remembrence of those early days I threw in an old running gag. One of Army budies that I first started playing with had this horrible problem saying Behemoth for some reason and it always came out Bahumut . Well, he is in Iraq ATM so its very unlikely he will see this anytime soon but just a little shout out to him. He always made life in the barracks interesting .

[Vindea]

Rockin' story, MW. How about that leave?

Vindea

[Myths n' Wraiths]

Coming home soon darlin'

[Ockham]

Great story MW!!!

This is so much cleaner and smoother then some of your other works.

<Winks to Vindea>

I like the idea of heroes using their abilities and helping rebuild this was well told. I liked everything about this story, the opening and fight scene all blended well. This story is so cool.

Very Good!

BTW I hear there's a band playing in Pocket D's. Next time you get there check'em out. Some day someone ought to tell their story. They's the bomb!!!



(P.S. Yah, Yah I am workin' on it too.)

[Myths n' Wraiths]

Thanks Ock. Perhaps some day those poor rockers will get their story told .

I am glad you liked the flow. I was a little worried about that towards the end becuse I wrote the first three quarters or so a while back and then got distracted for a couple months with my other project before finishing it. Good to know that that did not cause any lapse in quality.

[PhoenixHawk]

Ok I was a moron and didn't write anything up for this...so here I go

As the title says, it's a cool new beginning. I agree with Ock about Heroes using their powers to help rebuild. Not everyone wants to go out and bust heads and kick ass.

However, I think that's Wraith's mainstay, so he'll be chomping at the bit if he's not in the thick of the fight very soon.

This is also, as Ock said, very clean. Nice editing work Vindea.

I've seen some of what is coming, and I can't wait to see how it gets there, or where it goes once it does.

Get to it!

D

[Myths n' Wraiths]

Now I have a warm and fuzzy feeling