CoH Writer's Guild Review

[TealSwann]

I really enjoyed reading this story. You obviously have a creative sense of humor. I love how accepting you main character was of the kidnapping situation. I also enjoyed the bad PUG from the victim's POV. When we're on these teams, do we ever really stop and think about how it affects the little guy?

You seem to be off to a great start and I hope we see more stories from you.

[Vindea]

That was funny! The guy who talks like an lolterizt? Awesome Great story, especially for me, because I LOVE stories told from a different point of view.

Vindea